Wednesday 13 June 2012

Meeting Report: 11th June 2012

A few weeks ago 16 of us submitted entries for our latest group competitive exercise: travel writing.  On Monday 11 June we gathered to hear the results from our guest judge, Jeff Jewson Fleming from Eastbourne New Writers. Earlier this year two of our members judged a competition in Eastbourne, and Jeff was returning the favour. He was ideally qualified for the task, being both an experienced writer and enthusiastic traveller.
   Jeff
emphasised that to be successful, a good travel piece must grab the reader’s attention and imagination from the start, must be readable and interesting, and must make us want to visit the place in question. 
   A small number of pieces were singled out for special mention. Yvonne Zackim’s piece about a sea voyage on a cargo ship, ‘Ecuador on the CCNI Anakena’, was highly commended. In fourth place was Eileen Masters, with ‘Where there is no Plumber’, about a visit to Pakistan. Jeff particularly liked Eileen’s glimpses of family life in Pakistan – as well as the plumbing! For the third place piece, we came right back home, with Steph Gaunt’s light-hearted ‘Good Scone Guide to Hastings’. This reminded us that good travel writing does not necessarily involve visits to far-flung places – part of the point is to give new perspectives on places we already know.
   Jill Fricker’s thought-provoking piece, ‘New York – First Bite’, came second.  Jeff felt that Jill had brought out yet another aspect of successful travel writing – exploring the inner journey of the traveller, as well as the physical journey.  In first place was Mike Walsh, with his riveting ‘Lost Highway’, describing a classic road trip along Route 66 in 1968.  Mike’s skill in bringing the location to life as well as capturing the incidents – and individuals – encountered on the way, made him a worthy winner.
   We were grateful to Jeff for the hard work he had put in to read all our efforts and to comment on them so thoughtfully and constructively.
    The Group meets fortnightly at the White Rock Hotel. If you are interested in joining (there is currently a waiting list), or in finding out more about our activities, please contact the Membership Secretary, Amanda Giles, on 01424 442707 or e-mail membership.hwg@gmail.com.







Report by Steph Gaunt

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