Monday 25 April 2016

Manuscript Evening - 18th April, 2016


At our Manuscript Evening on 18 April, four writers brought sections of their novels-in-progress for feedback from other group members. Godfrey Forder's 'Mr Dickens and Mr Powell', tells the tale of the Victorian criminal underworld, set in an atmosphere of fog and gaslight. 'Watching' by Sandra Daniels opens with creepy cases from the files of a psychologist, but the reader begins to wonder if things are as they appear. Marcia Woolf's sequel to her first novel, 'Road Kill' is called 'The Cat' and explores an undercover investigation. 'Angels' of Islington' by Sam Davey depicts the angelic world investigating a powerful criminal cartel. Discussion followed about story continuity, the structure of the first chapter and the role of a prologues, the uses of long and short sentences, reducing the number of adjectives by boosting verbs and page layout in manuscripts being submitted to agents,

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